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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The three pie charts demonstrate how the Republic of
Korea
,
Sweden
, and the United
Kingdom
dispose
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 their
waste
 products. The Republic of
Korea
 and
Sweden
recycles
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recycle
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 69% and 25% of their hazardous
waste
 products respectively,
whereas
 the United
Kingdom
 only recycles 2% of the
waste
. Disposing of the
waste
 underground is very popular in
Sweden
 where 55% of dangerous
waste
 products
is
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are
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 moved underground. In the UK,
however
, only 8 per cent is
disposed
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 underground. Fire is another way of destroying dangerous rubbish. It is one of the most popular ways of
disposing
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ofdisposing
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 in
United
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the United
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Kingdom
 where it accounts for 82%. 9% and 20% for
Korea
 and
Sweden
 respectively. Chemical
tretment
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treatment
 and
Disposing
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 in
sea
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the sea
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is
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are
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 only adopted by
United
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the United
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Kingdom
 where it
stand
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stands
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 at 8
percent
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per cent
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 for both. In conclusion, incineration is the most popular process in the UK, recycling in the Republic of
Korea
, and underground in
Sweden
 are the popular means of getting rid of dangerous
waste
.
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