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tourists want to go to the UK for different reasons agree or disagree

The table provides information about how many tourists want to go to the
UK
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 for different reasons from 1994 to 1998. Overall, the number of travellers who expected to visit the
UK
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 gradually increased over the
period
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 except in 1995 and the main purpose was to go on holiday.
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, the most popular area was Western Europe whereas the least popular was made by North America. In terms of the holiday, that was the main goal of
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 residents throughout the
period
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, starting at around 15000 people.
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 it had a slight decline in 1995, the figure experienced steady growth between 1994 and 1998. Visitors who want to visit their friends and for business were approximately 3000 over the
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.
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, other reasons why came to the
UK
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 is the least famous reasons more or less 1000 during five years. At the beginning of the
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, Western Europe had a significant number of tourists at nearly 20000 people. Before it hit the top point just under 25000, it slightly decreased to about 17000 in 1995. While other areas including North America had less than 5000 over the
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.

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