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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

#education #luxury #right #wealth
Nowadays, the human
right
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 issue is raised to discuss in many countries around the world.
This
 global argument is mainly focused on the right to education for children. Some people said that education should be fundamental to achieving sustainable development. Importantly, it should be free to all the students in the
country
. I personally agree with the idea of human rights and reasons for easy access to the schooling
system
. It will be discussed in the following paragraph before the conclusion I reached. Discrimination is happening globally in the present, some citizens do not have the opportunity to study in school because of their family’s financial status.
For instance
, many kids in the slum area, do not have a chance to go to school because their parents cannot support the school dress, stationery book’s fee and tuition fee. They can only study at home with neighbours and siblings.
This
 is a severe problem which should take action as fast as possible. It is undeniable that education is a key for kids to become potential adults in the future as important as healthcare. The educational
system
 should be fully accessible in every age of the young generation
,
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 because these will reflex the potential of
country
 management.
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example
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 if the government do not care about the good quality of the student caring
system
, it is a severe failure of the
country
.
In addition
,
the
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wealth discrimination will happen because the illiteracy rate will increase dramatically.
This
 affect people who cannot get
the
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 job, do gain money and the poverty gap will
also
 in the high level. It is clearly seen that there are various problems which can cause the
country
 difficulty
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 if daughters and sons of the population cannot reach to the basic studying
system
. Free tuition is the key to protect and to be sustainable problem-solving.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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