In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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that printed
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or
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will fall out of use and reading online without any paying is used as an alternative way.
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newspapers or
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gradually are giving way to free online
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.
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. To be clear, because of easy and free
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to these data, people tend to read
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and newspapers through
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rather than
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like
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we could aware of every
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all over the world. It is for these reasons that without electronic
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thousands of threes annually.
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used to produce one paper while we could aware of the
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books. To conclude,
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networks
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is an absolute imperative due to the fact that saving our budget as well as green sources.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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