As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factor contributes to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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sometimes
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thought that the working time of
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accounts for most of their life,
job
satisfaction
plays an important role in personal wellbeing elements. From my perspective, there are 2 main factors affecting
job
satisfaction
.
Firstly
, the
salary
level
is an essential element in the working pleasure of workers.
This
is because almost all employees want to have a good
salary
level
meeting their needs and help them have a better life.
Secondly
,
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environment
also
contributes directly to
job
satisfaction
. The reason is that a good environment including factors
such
as: friendly, sociable and helpful colleagues, the fair company policy and having many promotion chances helps workers feel comfortable and easily complete all their tasks.
However
, it is hard for all workers to have the expectation of
job
satisfaction
.
This
is because high
salary
jobs
demand a huge
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mount
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of work and have much pressure.
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many managers give up thousand dollars
jobs
in big companies to do free
jobs
with a lower
salary
level
in order not to be under a lot of pressure. Meanwhile, many comfortable
jobs
do not meet the required
salary
of employees. In conclusion, two important elements affecting
job
satisfaction
are the
salary
level
and the working environment. I firmly believe that the expectation of
job
satisfaction
for all works is impossible.
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