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school teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of student than parents.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

#school #teachers #development #student #parents
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is often argue
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 between educators and
parents
 about developing
student
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 at
different
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aspect
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 that
school
 teachers are more
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 than
parents
.
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 agree with
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 notion that teachers are trained to teach formal lessens
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then
school
 is a good place for students to make
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friend
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. in
fact
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parents
 have
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 and important role to growing children but by
train
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 them at home alone does not have perfect educate for them because
parents
 do not know different
method
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 about formal lessens and
in addition
 at home children cannot find
new
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 friend and will not train social
behavior
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for example
 at
school
 children try different group activities and by
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experience
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 they will learn teamwork or another example they can play outdoor activities
such
 as soccer or basketball with their friends. as result, a strongly believe that
school
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 a better place for learning various social skills and
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 important opportunity to understand weaknesses and make them to strengths.
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