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What distinguishes young people from their parents' or grandparents' generation is a lack of physical exercise. Today's generation are spending far too long playing computer games, chatting aimlessly on social networking sites or simply watching TV, and too little time being active. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #parents #grandparents #generation #lack #exercise #computer #games #sites #tv #time
It is a hot topic of discussion that young people like to spend their time in front TV while playing games or watching movies 
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 the day. I totally disagree with 
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 am going to explain my reasons in the following paragraphs. 
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 teenagers like to kill their time doing something that they like the most, for 
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 playing games, watching television or in some cases chatting with strangers is 
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 these days. The main reason why 
this
 generation chose 
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technology
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 both of 
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 are either working 
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 the day or in some cases they got divorced in their earlier years, 
hence
 to survive the feeling of 
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loneliness
 younger kids take these steps, which 
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 affect their body and as a 
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 they become 
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 to a 
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sedentary
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, another reason is that majority of the parents like to see their kids succeeding in academic studies. They force their kids to join 
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 with their school hours 
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, most of the younger ones started gaining weight in the earlier years 
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 of life. I still remember back in India after 6 hours of school study my parents forced me to join extra 
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 study sessions and after that I
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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