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Has technology made the world better? We are increasingly shifting to computers in education, business, hospitals, crime detection etc. This dependency on computers is good or bad?

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Human beings are living in the digital world. Especially
now a days
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, most of the activities we do, are derived
by
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 gadgets.
Hence
, technology has become an integral part of our lives.
For example
, with the invention of smart houses and
internet
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the internet
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 of things, mankind can control everything in their houses, with the push of a button. Computers are one of the most prominent technological inventions. These machines have allowed
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people to perform
time consuming
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 tasks in a matter of minutes.
Moreover
, workstations have transformed the way companies use to run their businesses.
As a result
,
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corporate organizations can function in an efficient and effective manner.
Thus
, leading to productivity and profitability.
For instance
, prior
of
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 utilizing
such
 processing machines. Manufacturing companies were consuming
couple
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 of days in maintaining their inventory.
However
, with the use
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high end
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 PC’s
this
 task I now completed in
the
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 matter of minutes.
Therefore
, reducing manual efforts, time and cost.
Similarly
, workstations have
also
 transformed the medical industry. As
,
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 doctors can perform complicated operations with ease and in a risk-free manner.
In addition
, it has become convenient to store
patient’s
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patients’
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information
 and medical history in storage devices.
Hence
, minimizing paperwork and making it easier to retrieve
patient’s
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patients’
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information
.
On the contrary
, there are some disadvantages of utilizing systems.
For instance
, hackers can gain access to customer
information
, patient
information
 and
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medial
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 record.
Secondly
, they can wipe out the medical
information
 resulting in
life threatening
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situation
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. To conclude, systems have improved the way we operate.
However
, there are certain grey areas
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needs
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 to
be
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addresses
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 and resolved. In order to ensure
safety
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the safety
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 of the people and businesses.
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