Some people believe that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It has now become a debatable context as to whether
environment
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concerns should be addressed on a national scale or it is better to tackle them on an international level. Some people think that different countries have different
issues
related
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invironment
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environment
, so it is a national matter; while in my opinion, it is a severe issue that can only be resolved with
a
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global collaboration.
First
and foremost, one part of the society
believe
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that
invironmental
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environmental
problems
such
as pollution and global warming, depend on boundaries.
In other words
, air
polution
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pollution
may be caused by huge coal
consumtion
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consumption
in the Asian regions whereas it could be occured by the
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greenhouse
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green house
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greenhouse
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gases in the United States of America.
For example
, a recent study has demonstrated that the major
concen
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concern
of air pollution for America are
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green house
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gases while it is
wood burning
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and coal
consumtion
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consumption
in India.
On the other hand
, some individuals think that atmospheric
issues
have now become inevitable and can merely be resolved when all the countries cooperate
each
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other and fight together against it.
For instance
,
issues
like global warming can be resolved when all the countries in the world work as a team. In conclusion,
although
some of the mankind think that
invironmental
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environmental
issues
should be solved on a national scale, in my perceptions, since it is a huge problem so it can be alleviated by global collaboration.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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