You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - explain why you would like the job - give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing the letter to apply for the position of a short term live-in caregiver, published

last

week in one of the popular Australian family magazines that you have asked for your six-year-old baby. I am really keen on that role as my passion to be a primary school teacher soon. I have had an experience of looking after children especially under five to eight years old due to my younger siblings who are at that age. I love to stay with children because they are a bundle of joy and

that is

why I took care of children when I was in my hometown. I just finished my thesis which is specializing in the subject of kid behaviour who are under ten years old, so I am confident enough to take care of your teenager to be a trustworthy babysitter in a short period of time. I am currently in Australia that my uncle invited me to visit around before I get into working life. I may be visiting tourist attraction places, tasting local food and having memories of local cultures as well as lifestyles of Australians. I will be

waiting

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the good news from you and hoping to get a chance for looking after your precious youth soon. Yours faithfully, Honey Linn

Submitted by hnylinn on Sat Oct 09 2021

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

218 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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