Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
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in the cost of petrol , the problem of pollution and traffic will be solved . Add an article
an incline
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affect them .
Despite the surge in the value of gasoline the government should have Correct your spelling
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apply
the
vehicles . Correct article usage
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the government
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the traffic on roads or pollution , improves the public Change the verb form
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the situation of traffic and pollution .Correct your spelling
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