In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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and has been unique perspectives. The

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believe that pupils have to pay attention strictly to whatever they expect and

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want to achieve.

However

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of

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teenagers who want to

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. Significantly, they have a lot of dreams and sometimes have to persist

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is hard to overcome.

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, adolescents will try hard with what can indicate and take them to the goal by ourself without suggestion of a family and can be overcome to obstacles. Indeed, when they grow up to be the leader, they will handle to facing problems and

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have the protecting themselves from urgency situations.

Therefore

, the

parents

should encourage and

also

must give the good opportunities for developing their skills.

Nonetheless

,

this

message can cause disadvantages to children because it makes them

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be pressure in finding out

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other suitable ways

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achievement

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different ways to learning and to be

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in education or career which is chosen by personality.

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, when they are expected from their

parents

, they always push themselves which affect

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long term and

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.

Consequently

, the families need to observe their teenagers and should not

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much more. In conclusion, in

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spirit

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of hard tasks towards accomplishment, the family must concern about mental illness. In fact, the

parents

and pupils have to

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for the best way altogether.