nowadays, people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done lack of sleep?

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Being not able to take a rest is one of the major issues that humankind facing every day. In

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I will be discussing the possible causes along with solutions in lacking asleep.

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with, most people experiencing a lack of naps due to the demands of their works. There are some companies

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do not have a flexible schedule and they suddenly changing the time without prior notice.

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, according to the survey 25% of employees working in Qatar’s factory complaint and experienced

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because most of them are need to work overtime instantly especially if there is a quota.

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, their body clock is changing and if it happens in a long time it will lead you to hardly get adequate sleep.

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, certain problems will be developed like insomnia; the inability of a person to staying asleep at night and some people cannot function as well as having difficulties

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their particular jobs.

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will be solved by getting exercise regularly, at least 30 minutes a day, while others are taking a yoga class, avoid consuming too much caffeine or alcohol, and try to do some bedtime rituals,

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as taking a warm bath, reading some books and listening to music in order to relax your mind.

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, certain tips will help you to have a good sleep at night. To conclude,

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individual activities of daily living.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Insomnia
Sleep deprivation
Sleep disorders
Sleep quality
Fatigue
Exhaustion
Restless
Restorative sleep
REM sleep
Circadian rhythm
Sleep hygiene
Napping
Sleep duration
Melatonin
Sleep-inducing
Drowsiness
Sleep disturbances
Obstructive sleep apnea
Snoring
Sleepwalking
Sleep talking
Shift work
Sleeping pills
Sleep aid
Relaxation techniques
Meditation
Deep breathing

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nowadays, people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done lack of sleep?

Your opinion

A photograph you submitted to your local art gallery has been selected to feature in an upcoming exhibition. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter - tell him/her about your good news -describe the photograph -invite him/her to attend the exhibition with you

Some people spend a lot of money on weddings. Why do they do this? Do you think it is good to spend a lot of money on weddings?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community?

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.