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Grandparents take care of the children When their parents are out at their work. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

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In
this
 competitive world, the
parents
 are working for the better future of their wards.So
grandparents
 look after the
kids
 while
parents
 are engaged in their professional life.
This
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prons
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 and cons in the subsequent paragraphs. On the one hand, there are numerous benefits associated
of
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 keeping
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child under the guardianship of
grandparents
.
Safe
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 environment is the prominent one as the
children
 are living under the same roof in the presence of elder people which helps to imbibe cultural values in them. An article published in The Tribune stated that
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 ratio has declined by
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 in the past few years as elder people are busy
in
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upbringing their
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grandchildren
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grand
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children
.Apart from
this
,
grandparents
 provide nutritious
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home made
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 food without any adulteration that leading to healthy in life.
On the other hand
, there are potential problems associated with looking after the
kids
 by
parents
 of their
parents
.
Firstly
, there is
huge
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 generation gap between
kids
 and elders.
Therefore
,
the
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 older people are not able to develop
understanding
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 with
the
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infants.
This
 creates conflict in family relations .
For instance
, If professional
care taker
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 will look after the
children
, the mental capabilities of
kids
 would have been more developed.
In addition
 to
this
,
grandparents
 allow
children
 to play video games or watch tv
instead
 of involving in any productive activity. Due to
this
, not only the
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eye sight
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 weakens but
also
 their mind is diverted from studies creating hindrance in the overall growth. To conclude,
although
 it is having 30% negative aspects in terms of disputes in family. Yet in terms of
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 environment and food cannot be overlooked.
Hence
 , it would be
sagacious
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the sagacious
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 approach to leave
children
 with the
grandparents
.
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