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Some parents and teachers think that children’s behaviour should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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It is often argued that the
behaviour
 of youngsters should be closely controlled by their parents and instructors While others say that it is fine for children to act according to their wish and should not be punished for
this
 act of freedom. I will be going to discuss both sides here, but I personally stand with the
first
 view.
To begin
 with, some parents and teachers think by controlling one's
behaviour
 we can teach them some valuable life lessons which later on help them in their life. Basically, according to ,them it helps them to be more patient, respectful, kind toward others. I am an example of
this
 myself. when I was a teenager my mother used to scold me for my rude
behaviour
 and I think it greatly affects my mind now. it helped me a lot basically I am more kind and confident now. On the other side, folks who think that we have no right to control someone's life has their own valid reasons. According to them, teenagers who are not watched or controlled by their families learn everything on their own and are
also
 able to take important decisions on their own. A survey conducted in 2017, showed some dramatic results, in the
,
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survey it was clearly mentioned that young ones who are free from their parents are more successful than one's who were controlled by their family or teachers in their prime years. In the
last
, I just want to say that, controlling children's
behaviour
 is not a bad thing it actually helps them to be
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more successful and nice human being later on years.
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