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Today, the high sales of popular goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In my opinion, advertising plays a vital role in deciding the high revenue of a company;
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 isn’t the significant fact which can dominate over the point of actual needs of the society. We are aware that the most vital asset in the upcoming date is data, and the primary sectors that will be trading with them are the advertising sectors;
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 can help us overview advertising industries’ potential and how advertising has become an important sector to deal with. Nowadays, there is no doubt that the advertising industry has grown its roots very deep in consumers’ minds. But I consider that an internal instinct mainly caused when the
consumer
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 notices perfect compatibility for his needy voids plays a significant role in deciding whether to buy it or not. A well-known example can be taken by a company that has strongly proved
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 fact, a brand known as “Tesla.” Keeping in mind the needs of Eco-friendliness and economic conditions, their electric cars have made a big name and brand in
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 industry. The point to notice is about their sales strategy. They mainly claim towards the quality and requirement based on their consumers and show complete reluctance towards
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. I agree with the point that
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 plays an important factor, but the primary purpose of promotion is to increase the reach and show the features of their products to the
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;
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, nowadays,
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 is more inclined in forcing the
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 directly or indirectly to buy their products. Seeing the after results and consumers satisfaction
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 comes under strategies for high sales of a company. Affected by
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 severe and robust effect of
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 on a
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 may placate him to buy their goods. Still, one day or the other, the
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 will realize the real need of the product and will show reluctance in repurchasing them.
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