As Charles
DarwinsChange to a genitive case
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theory about evolution
suggestChange the verb form
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about
survivalAdd an article
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of the fittest. It can be observed that
people
often tend to commit
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crimeFix the agreement mistake
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in order to survive in
this
world where
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of
people
struggle for their living.
This
rate of
crime
is
increasing in many countries.As government fails to solve problems like poverty , unemployment and
with the increasing population.
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urge of
people
to live lavish lives
also
tendChange the verb form
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to act as fuel for
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crime
rate.
Crimes
this
have become more
than before mainly because of lack of
in
people
's heart.
and other
have made
people
more corrupt
hence
,
therefore
they lack
and
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the ability to differentiate between right and wrong.Action
showing
crimes
tend to
affectsChange the verb
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person'sCorrect article usage
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mind.
Every problem has
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and so does
this
one
. I
people
to do meditation as it makes our
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capable to differentiate between right and wrong.It helps
one
to calm oneself
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about
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to their problem rather than life
crimes
. It
also
makes
one
positive and
hence
enriches
soul with positivity.
Government can
should Remove a modal verb
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measuresChange the verb form
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to increase employment and
as they are key for earning money and
hence
, survival becomes
with it.
Also
the rules regarding
crimes
like murder, rape should have severe
as it threatens
people
for not
such
crimes
.
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, it is observed that countries with strict rules often have very low
crime
rates.
Also
, Toxicative substance should be abolished as they fuels
crime
.
For
driving while
with alcohol or drugs makes accidents more prone. Studies
suggestsChange the verb form
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that
people
commit more
crime
as they are not in
.
Hence
measures should be taken to ban drugs, alcohol etc.
Lastly
,
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should take
from other countries who have solved
this problemsChange the determiner
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these problems
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and make new policies and rules with respect to it.
Lastly
,
should motivate
people
to do good.
Also
,
people
should be vigilant they should neither commit
crime
nor support
one
doing it.