Some people believe that money is the major source of happiness in life. do you strongly agree or disagree?

Some people would argue that

money

is the main source of prosperity in

life

, whereas others would argue that,

although

money

is an essential requirement of

life

, it is not the ultimate goal of living a prosperous

life

. I strongly agree with the

second

argument. There are

Several

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factors

which

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that

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emphasise the importance of financial stability regarding basic necessities of

life

. Human beings have

variety

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of basic needs and

money

is required to

fulfill

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fulfil

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those needs,

for example

, basic

education

and health facilities must be provided to everyone, as without these,

life

is considered difficult, sometimes impossible. To illustrate

this

further

, I, being a doctor, have experienced a lot of intense and emotional situations, where people are very helpless, as their loved ones are suffering from serious conditions like cancers or sepsis, which, at times are curable, but the attendants, being not able to afford, are in dire need of financial help,which, if not arranged in time, leads to loss of a precious

life

.

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is true for

education

. Educated communities

helps

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in building a strong nation. Good

education

is the key to bring harmony and peace

,

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and

to establish

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a productive environment in the world.

Education

is,

however

, highly expensive these days and good finances are needed in order to meet

this

requirement.

However

, there are several factors, that supports why considering

money

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source of happiness in

life

, and not controlling

unlimited

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and unstoppable urge of earning

money

in time , have devastating consequences.

Firstly

, doing so will lead to

lack

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of quality time expenditure among family members, so elders will have no idea about how their youngsters are using the

hard earned

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money

. To illustrate

this

further

, a lot of times, it has been experienced by many families, that the unchecked use of their resources and assets by their children has ruined their generation. In conclusion, I am of the belief that

money

is essential for affording the basic necessities of

life

, but is not the major source of happiness in

life

.