Nowadays, childhood obesity has become a serious health issue. What is the reason for this? How can this be tackled?

One of the increasing actual health problems of nowadays is gaining excess weight among
young
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generation.
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issue can be arisen
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the wide spreading of transnational fast
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food producing
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corporations and
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healthcare
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regulations from the government may be considered to tackle
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it. With the new technological and engineering opportunities in our era
food
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production is becoming more and more available and harmful. Corporations like
McDonalds
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, Burger King have regular customers all over the world including adolescents because they offer tasty
food
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for
cheaper
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price
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in minimum waiting time.
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, so loved junk
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burgers, pizzas have a high level of fats, in which cholesterol is the main reason
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obesity. The
centers
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of ‘tasty’
food
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are located in every alley of every not only mega polices
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small cities. From my own experience every time when I go out with my friends, we end up
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sitting in
local
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fast-
food
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restaurant as other teenagers around. The law regulations are the strongest principles that can stop
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increasing number of youngsters obesity. To be
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,
age
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limits for visiting
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restaurants should be announced since
healthy
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development of new generations is the most significant thing.
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eating pizzas and burgers can be permitted from
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foods with
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level
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of calories as traditional cuisine of China can be used from
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18. To sum up, the industrialization of
food
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management affects
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the rising of youth’ obesity level these days and the introduction of new conditions for the use of products by
age
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may be reviewed to tackle with it.

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