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Online courses make conventional classrooms unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#courses #classrooms
In
this
 day and age, the advent of online courses replaced
the
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traditional
classes
 and
this
seem
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 to be an increasingly common trend in many parts of the world. From my perspective,
although
this
 standpoint might be justifiable to a certain extent, I believe that physical classrooms are not ceased to exist. On the one hand, the view of the benefit of online
classes
 is superior, compared to traditional ones should be reasonable.
First
 and foremost, virtual learning is more cost-efficient since it does not rely on numerous expenses that brick-and-mortar operation incurs,
such
 as: administrative staff and space. Another compelling factor is that it allows students to overcome time constraints and geographical boundaries. Take students who are living
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 the outskirts of the city as a lenient example. Because they settle down in far-off
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, teachers and tutors with technical expertise and good qualifications are scares in those places.
On the other hand
, the necessity of
traditional
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 classroom model should be taken into account.
Initially
, certain fields
extricably
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inextricably
extricable
 require physical interaction.
For example
, some disciplines, particularly chemistry and physics offer elaborate lab
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 and equipment that can only be allowed by
a two-way interactive
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a two-way interactive class
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classes
instead
 of
virtual
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the virtual
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 environment. Another reason is that elements of classroom dynamics that studying in
comfort
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 of one’s zone is unable to emulate.
For instance
, thanks to interactive
activity
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activities
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 and live
discussion
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, the students’ interpersonal skills can be improved. If the traditional
classes
 are replaced by a virtual environment, students are not inclined to achieve their full potential. The conclusion to be drawn is that in spite of the merits of online courses, the traditional class models should not be displayed.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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