You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities Write at least 150 words.

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Hello Mr Brown,

This

is James Austin from Newyorkshire and I recently attended your concert at the university main hall .I am

this

writing to express my joyful experience regarding the concert , I attended on 24th June and your jazz performance was excellent .

Moreover

,my mind got relaxed and I felt rejuvenated afterwards. Let me explain to you , I

also

play jazz though I am at the initial stages of learning and

also

taking online classes for

this

In addition

this

, I am

also

studying in college so I don’t get much time to practice . I want that if you could provide me with some important tips and tricks for the initial learning.I know you are quite a busy person but it will be my humble pleasure if you provide me with some basic information about the instrument and it would be quite beneficial for me.

Further

, I wanted to know that if I need to follow any booklet for learning purposes.I will be very glad if I receive any valuable information related to music from your side. Hope I will hear from your side soon .

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

189 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

stellar performance
captivating
musical prowess
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repertoire
collaboration
mentorship
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aspiring musician
composition
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harmonize
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