A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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letter to express my pleasure regarding the sponsorship of your company in the local sports team for the duration of two years.It would be quite beneficial for the local public as they will get access to world-class infrastructure for games and it will boost their morale to play at an international level.

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, it would be beneficial for the physical health of the youth.

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with , even the payment for concerts will enhance the interest of the general public in art and theatre. It would

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field. In my viewpoint, the company should pay the initial amount to the local council for arranging facilities for the locality.

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, the council will invest in the infrastructure needed for both things.Your company’s these efforts would give the local people a lifetime experience like to attend an open-air concert. Best wishes from my side. Yours faithfully, Jagjit

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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