Many people today find that the cost of attaining a university level education is extremely high for the students and their families. What are the causes for this situation, and how can governments, universities and the students themselves overcome the problem?

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These days university education is highly expensive and has become a financial burden on most
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as well as their families. Even though there are several reasons contributing to
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issue,
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as the preference of private educational institutes over public ones, appropriate measures can be taken to address
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problem effectively.
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with causes, one factor that has led to high fee structures is the bar set by private
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, it is assumed that the more expensive the course or program is the more
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it will be.
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perception is ingrained in the mindsets of
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by the “
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” institutes. Another reason that people cannot afford a degree in a decent institute is the lack of economic stability. Most
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today work to pay their
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and in an era where
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of living is so high, university education becomes an inconvenience.
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end up acquiring difficult loan plans. Possible solutions are
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and have to be critically strategized but can bring a positive change. Private
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should be held accountable by the government for the program fee; any unnecessary charges should be excluded.
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on an income-based model should be replaced with
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education oriented
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one.
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another important remedy is to connect
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with the right organizations for
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or
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jobs as individuals with a stable income are more likely to complete their programs than the contrary. To conclude,
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are generally not affordable for most people and the causes are both due to the lack of attention by the government and an effort to protest by
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the student
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as well as their families. Policies to hold these institutes answerable while providing occupational opportunities to the
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will resolve
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problem.
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