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Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Other say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Students are the backbone of our society, and every country needs their productivity in different ways which would impact the country growth and outcome, Some
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 believe that learners should be taught academically taught in their school lives whereas others believe that co-circular activities are very important for a graduate to grow. In my opinion, a mixture of both should be taught to the students.
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 forthcoming essay will discuss both views. On one hand,
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 a belief that teaching academics in school life would strengthen the skills of a pupil, I would strongly agree with
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 as studying core subjects in your education activity sharpens your skills and makes you learn a subject deeply that perhaps help you to grow in your soul.
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, to get a job in technical fields
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 as accounting or finance, every individual requires to have core knowledge about the subject.
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 argue that sports and extra circular activities should
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 be considered as an integral part of scholar life.
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, every freshman is different and special, some
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 might lack in studies but perform well in sports or music, which would later help them grow in their field and might help to boost the economy and name of the country in the international forum by representing them internationally. To recaiaputale,
although
 society may differ in their opinions I believe that undergraduate should be taught both the subjects as it would make them an allrounder in their growth so that they would be used more productively.
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