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If you could ask anyone for professional advice, who would you choose and what would you ask? Why?

#anyone #advice
It would be a great opportunity for me to get professional
advice
 from a
business
 person.
Definitely
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 everyone has their own hero in the world to whom he/she wants to emulate or to become that kind of person in his life. I would love to seek professional
advice
 from
Jeff
 Bezos, who is an American entrepreneur, media proprietor, investor, and computer engineer. He is the founder and executive chairman of Amazon. Now, I am looking for a piece of
advice
 from him on the
business
 side
such
 as how to take bold decisions to expand a
business
, and how to explore new opportunities in the world. In the future, I would love to see myself as an entrepreneur who would be having own company. So, I want to seek
advice
 for my future plan because I need bold decisions to expand my
business
 and change strategy
time
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 to time.
Jeff
 started Amazon “an Ecommerce book” company in 1994.
Then
 he kept expanding the company and kept adding new products to its e-commerce platform. It reflects that he is a visionary
business
 person. As the new product and opportunity come , he tries to incorporate that one too in his
business
. There is the necessary
advice
, I would love to take from
Jeff
. Once, I would be having enough
advice
 to take my
business
 to a new high.I would like to donate my wealth to poor people. Without contributing to society, I do not feel the value of life.
Jeff
 is
also
 a philanthropist. Recently, in February 2020, Bezos pledged $10 billion to combat climate change through the Bezos Earth Fund. I like
this
 kind of attitude towards society.
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