The government has the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe it is individuals' responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Never has the topic concerning a healthy

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failed to attract our attention.

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, when it comes to whether a healthy

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is the responsibility of the government or everyone, the supporters of each view have their own justifications. Some

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are adamant that the government’s intervention is conductive, while others contend that individuals’ effort is essential. From my own perspective, the two views are not mutually exclusive. It is undeniable that the government’s intervention would bring some profits.

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and foremost, the government can implement some laws and legislation to prohibit

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from littering, especially in the sea and rivers. It is not rare to see that some abandoned items by residents are unrenewable or even poisonous. Some of these harmful materials are prone to be discarded into the sea.

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, the public will be vulnerable to

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which contains poisonous slime, which will put the health of the public in jeopardy.

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, these measures would act as a deterrent effect and encourage the citizens to obey the law, which can alleviate

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severe consequences.

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, the government has the ability and responsibility to strengthen the enforcement of the laws and legislations to punish those who sell unhealthy

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. It is not uncommon to see that some

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manufacturers sometimes over-exaggerate the commodities and even make some counterfeit foods to cheat the customers. For some customers, they cannot distinguish whether the

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is healthy or not, which is prone to make the customers be susceptible to the over-prevalent of advertisement.

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,

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policy is inclined to terminate/eradicate their misbehaviours and the public can eat safe and healthy foods

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the benefits of government’s supervision are multifarious, the merits of ourselves’ effort cannot be overlooked.

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with, parents need to educate their children about the importance of a healthy

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. It is generally believed that an unhealthy

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can cause various health problems, especially for kids.

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, some young

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are deficient in identifying which

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is healthy or not.

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, parents should guide children to avoid eating unhealthy

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as junk

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and sugary snacks during the day. In a long run, they can become increasingly health-conscious.

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, diets depend on the individual specific status and lifestyle. It is universally acknowledged that young

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are facing severe situations/fierce competition to find a job, leading a hectic lifestyle. An example can be seen that some office workers lack time to do home-cook

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or proper meal which rich in nutrients and vitamins.

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, they have a huge propensity for eating fast foods which contain too much fat, salt and sugar.

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have their own lifestyles and these would not be easily