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Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing cheap goods. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some populace thinks that companies ought to produce
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 that have high quality
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 others feel that the
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 must be cheap.In my opinion, in order to balance the buying power in the market, both kinds of
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 have to be encouraged. To commence with, the high-quality
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 have both pros and cons.
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, to highlight the advantages,these
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 use high-quality raw materials
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 making them resistant to breaking.
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, advanced features like water resistance, scratch proofs helps customers easy maintenance.
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, the introduction of Bluetooth headset has made driving and calling both possible simultaneously due to its wireless feature.
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, it is long-lasting and easy to maintain it is very expensive.
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, to highlight some of the disadvantages like high cost. Even though these elite company commodities has various features, it is highly expensive as well.
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, not all people have the affordability to buy .
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, Audi cars cost more than one crore in INR.
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 can only be bought by members who belong to the elite classes. So, for the non-elite classes to buy, it is mandatory for the
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 to have a varying price range. To conclude, In order to maintain the balance of buying power in the economy it is a prominent fact that the
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 produced by the factories have to be of high , medium and low quality.
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 ,in turn, will encourage prices of items to vary from high to low
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 enabling people from different financial backgrounds to buy .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • disposable goods
  • economic benefits
  • frequent replacements
  • technological adaptation
  • manufacturing affordability
  • environmental responsibility
  • longevity
  • minimize costs
  • wider society
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