All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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Vehicles
that are running on city roads, that uses petrol and diesel as
fuel
, should not
allowed
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and prohibited for its use, and
instead
most efficient and
environment
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friendly electric
cars
be
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used. State opinion and main reasons: I total agree that those
vehicles
that run on conventional
fuel
, should be expired from
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use and modern
vehicles
that
works
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on Electric batteries can be
instead
used. In forthcoming, paragraphs I will explain in detail why
transport
vehicles
which
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uses
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traditional fuels should
be forbid
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.
Majority
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of
Transport
vehicles
engines like
cars
, buses and trucks are designed and manufactured to Utilize primary
source
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of conventional fuels like Gasoline LPG, Petrol and Diesel but in recent years
this
trend is transferring to electric
cars
. Road
Transport
Vehicles
which runs on conventional
fuel
,
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emits harmful toxic gases which are polluting our environment and destroying
earth’s
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natural habitat.
Consequently
, many living animal species from insects
,
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to birds and other animals are severely affected and are dying, by these harmful gases and are verge
at
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extinction. According to the research conducted by a New York metropolitan board on pollution control, it was found that if the current emission of
transport
vehicles
is not regulated, it will result in
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the extinction
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of many living animal species and eventually our future generations may not be aware of them.
As a result
, switching conventional
fuel
transport
vehicles
to more efficient and
environment
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friendly electric
transport
vehicles
will assist in regulating
of
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air pollution.
Moreover
, Electric
Cars
which works on very efficient Electric Batteries will have
huge
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benefit to the customers, because it reduces
conventional
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fuel
cost of petrol, diesel and gasoline with charging batteries, which is only 30% to traditional
fuel
.
Thus
, it was found that recent past, many leading car manufacturers like
tesla
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, Toyota and Hyundai had increased production capacities of electric
cars
owing to
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demand
of
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it
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. But
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public
are
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still anticipating in
improvement
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the improvement
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of technology of these electric
cars
, which will eventually lead to lower the prices of it favouring
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section of our community eventually who can purchase these electric
cars
.
Moreover
, our Government policies awareness campaigns to encourage individuals, as well as providing incentives to electric car manufacturers
also
proved to be successful in bridging the gap, of converting conventional
fuel
vehicles
to electric
vehicles
.
Hence
, I conclude that recent advancement in electric car technology has led to
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increase
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in demand
of
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it and
hence
cars
which
uses
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traditional
fuel
are depleting day by day from our city roads.
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  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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