All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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that are running on city roads, that uses petrol and diesel as

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and prohibited for its use, and

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most efficient and

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friendly electric

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used. State opinion and main reasons: I total agree that those

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that run on conventional

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use and modern

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used. In forthcoming, paragraphs I will explain in detail why

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traditional fuels should

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.

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engines like

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, buses and trucks are designed and manufactured to Utilize primary

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of conventional fuels like Gasoline LPG, Petrol and Diesel but in recent years

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trend is transferring to electric

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emits harmful toxic gases which are polluting our environment and destroying

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natural habitat.

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, many living animal species from insects

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to birds and other animals are severely affected and are dying, by these harmful gases and are verge

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extinction. According to the research conducted by a New York metropolitan board on pollution control, it was found that if the current emission of

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is not regulated, it will result in

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of many living animal species and eventually our future generations may not be aware of them.

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to more efficient and

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friendly electric

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will assist in regulating

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air pollution.

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which works on very efficient Electric Batteries will have

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benefit to the customers, because it reduces

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cost of petrol, diesel and gasoline with charging batteries, which is only 30% to traditional

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.

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, Toyota and Hyundai had increased production capacities of electric

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still anticipating in

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of technology of these electric

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, which will eventually lead to lower the prices of it favouring

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section of our community eventually who can purchase these electric

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, our Government policies awareness campaigns to encourage individuals, as well as providing incentives to electric car manufacturers

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proved to be successful in bridging the gap, of converting conventional

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to electric

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.

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, I conclude that recent advancement in electric car technology has led to

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cars

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traditional

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are depleting day by day from our city roads.