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I, Balram Panwar, grew up in a small town , Rampur Maniharan, India, where my family is heavily involved in agriculture. I used to do lots of chores along with my father at the fields. I had gone through the pain of farmers who spent all their lives in their fields. My father used to talk about the importance of education in
life
.
Similarly
, my mother
also
 used to put emphasis on education. While working in the field, I have learned the most valuable lessons of my
life
 i.e we should respect all people, the importance of teamwork and how to mingle with people of different tribes. After finishing college in India, I got a chance to study MSc. at the University of Southern California. Since
then
, I have been working as a software Engg. in top companies in Silicon Valley, California. Most recently, I led the software development in the world’s leading wireless technology innovator, Qualcomm. In the current role, Apart from software development, daily I face situations that require interpersonal skills: interviewing a job applicant, rewarding an employee, providing constructive criticism, etc. On multiple occasions, I interact with customers to deliver customer-centric solutions.
This
 cooperative
life
 has
also
 been providing me with better opportunities and
life
-changing skills like get a global and transversals vision of any business, the importance of building and working under an organization, and plan a roadmap and setting milestones for the long-term objectives. Both the aspects of my
life
 i.e village and cooperate
life
, have been making me a person, who can think above and beyond from a personal level. Still,I feel that there is a lot to add to my
life
 too. So that I can contribute some to
this
 beautiful world.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bilingual
  • multilingual
  • fluency
  • communicate
  • cognitive skills
  • cultural awareness
  • opportunities
  • globalized world
  • job market
  • interact
  • linguistic abilities
  • cultural exchange
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • foreign travel
  • personal growth
  • academic achievement
  • self-confidence
  • enhance
  • cross-cultural communication
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