You recently attended a conference and would like to give a presentation to your colleagues about it. Write a letter to your manager and include: The topic of the conference Why you want to present about it When it could be done

Dear

Mr.

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John, I am writing

this

letter in relation to the recent conference that I did attend

last

week at

Moriques

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Moriches

.The conference was completely amazing. There were

plethora

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of VIP's who attended

this

event. I was completely stunned by the quality of information that was circulated amongst the members. As

next

week we have

annual

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the annual

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day of our branch, I would like to take

this

opportunity to showcase the same details that I inherited through the meetup to all my office colleagues, in the form of a presentation. The main theme of the conference was "Attributes to enhance productivity at

workplace

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the workplace

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". I totally believe that

this

would motivate my teammates and would in turn enhance their social skills

moreover

will help in increasing the productivity of AVG firm. I am planning to squeeze in my presentation towards the

begining

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beginning

of the event

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so that most of them will be able to absorb

my

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message that I want to deliver to them. I hope you would consider my request and give me a chance to work on it. Yours faithfully Neethu Babu