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Many people believe that the government should encourage industries and businesses to move from large cities to the countryside. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, there is a contentious issue regarding whether the authorities should provide incentives for factories and other
companies
 to relocate from metropolitan
areas
 to rural sites. In my opinion, the merits outweigh the drawbacks. There are considerable benefits to locating
companies
 in regional
areas
. For businesses themselves, they can have a significant decline in costs,
such
 as the leases
on premises
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, which are usually dramatically higher in the big cities. It is
also
 likely to benefit rural communities by boosting their economies and providing job opportunities in the neighbourhood and preventing the need for them to make a long commute to work in the city.
Finally
, by locating
businessess
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businesses
 in remote
areas
 it can benefit cities by reducing overcrowding, traffic congestion, and pollution levels.
However
, there are potential drawbacks to
companies
 and businesses moving their premises outside metropolises. The main issue is that
companies
 located in regional
areas
 may be
further
 away from their employees.
This
 can make it more difficult to find the labour to work in the company. As well as
this
, the
companies
 may be located
further
 away from their customers, which might weaken their relationships with their customers. In conclusion, the merits to businesses relocating in more remote
areas
 seem to outweigh the drawbacks as it can benefit the
companies
 themselves, the local communities, and
also
 the metropolitan
areas
.
However
,
companies
 may face challenges to find labour and maintain close relationships with their customers. Given
this
situation
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 it seems that the government should offer incentives to encourage
companies
 to relocate to the countryside.
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