Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people supp ose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays abortion has
increases
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rapidly and becomes a controversial topic in society
this
is because of illiteracy and
also
of immaturity.In order to avoid miscarriage
people
should use prevention
methods
as we all are well known about the sayings like prevention is better than cure.Before doing
such
kind of action
people
should think about whether they are doing right. Every individual has
their
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her their

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own perspective and opinion regarding the issue.Some
people
are opposing
this
,as they feel it is a crime.Killing the fetus before giving birth is a criminal activity according to the
people
who are opposing it.While the others had their personal problems regarding their financial status.According to my opinion miscarriage is a criminal kind of thing as they are killing the unborn baby. On the other ,hand government has to propose some of the legal
methods
such
as it is necessary only when they are unable to feed the baby.And
also
the government has to educate illiterate
people
on feticide.,
However
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people
must be aware of sex and its prevention
methods
. To conclude that abortion should be accepted even though it is a serious issue if and only if there is a strong reason and high-budget evidence.
People
should be motivated by themselves on sex and contraception
methods
.
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