The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organized. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Very organised % All students 21 Age up to 22 years 18 Age 23-25 years 26 Age over 26 years 35

The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organized.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

                             Very organised %

All students	                        21

Age up to 22 years          	18

Age 23-25 years                     26

Age over 26 years                  35
Both diagrams above, one pie chart and one table
,
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apply
show examples
show
students
' responses to how
much
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apply
show examples
financially organized they would describe themselves.
In the
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The
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pie chart, it shows that 76% of the
students
believe they are either 'fairly organized' or 'very organized'. The table explained more about the
students
that answered 'very organized'.
The
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Of the
show examples
total of
students
that answered 'fairly organized' is 21% from all
students
that responded. There are three other
caterogies
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categories
here,
that
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which
show examples
are '
Age
up to 22
years
', '
Age
23-25
years
', and '
Age
over 26
years
'. The
students
that are in the first category, '
Age
up to 22
years
', take up 18% of the total
students
that answered 'very organized. In the
second
category, '
Age
23-25
years
', it's slightly more than the first, which is 26% of total
students
that are 'very organized'.
Lastly
, the
third
category, '
Age
over 26
years
',
take
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takes
show examples
up the most with 35% of total
students
that responded with 'very organized'.
This
research shows that the ability to be financially organized
develop
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develops
show examples
with
age
. From the findings, it can be concluded that UK
students
' are fairly good at managing their financial matters.
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