Traffic abd housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories andtheir employees to the country side. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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the most common problem, especially in major cities.

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these issues. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support my agreement will be discussed in detail.

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lower housing's demand, so the price of accommodation falls

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affordable price. People is to have more space for living

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area and library due to the ratio of the individual's space is increased by decreasing divisor.

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, many large industries are moved to Prachinburi which is larger land and less cost of living than Bangkok recently.

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the traffic

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jam and broken road. Especially, in major

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sometimes.

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transportations that always use heavy lorries can drop the road's lifetime. In Bangkok Thailand, it has the same problems and

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hence

the government declares the policy for motivating about displacing to another less town as Ratchaburi. In summary, Decreasing the

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population

by displacing the large factories and their labours can solve the housing and

traffic

issues and is to make life better in future.

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