Every day people see advertisements encouraging them to buy products they might not need or might not be able to afford. To what extent do you think people are influenced by advertising?
Nowadays, social media from TV to the Internet are overfilled by commercials and encouraging people to buy products that they don't need. I am inclined to believe advertisements have a tremendous influence on the population.
Moreover
regarding many ,psychologists this
is a malady and is called shopaholism.
Firstly
, according to
how social media develops, commercial
spread rapidly. The number of Fix the agreement mistake
commercials
broadcast
on the Internet have increased Change to a plural noun
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more
than 1000% since 2010 and are still expanding. Advertisement’s area is evolving and has many ways to influence the potential buyers consciously. Change preposition
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For example
: many online shopping applications know what customers buy and offer something similar with a discount. Therefore
, many search systems such
as Google gather information about customer preferences and regarding this
data provide suitable in
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their
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opinion
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opinions
offers
. I am convinced that the Internet is overfilled by ad publications and has a tremendous influence on Change preposition
on offers
users
preferences.
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Secondly
, according to
Social Data Researches number of shopaholics are
increasing gradually. Regarding reports every second individual buys something useless or disposable, each fourth individual buys totally unsuitable stuff and admits Correct subject-verb agreement
is
this
case that they are shopaholics, and only each fifty individual admits this
fact that he or she needs a psychologist's help. According to
research, the number of people with addiction has been increasing since the second millennium. No doubt about the fact that advertisements are affected negatively.
In a nutshell, commercials are evolving, expanding and conquering many social media platforms. Hence
, myriads of customers suffer from shopaholism and some of them do not realise this
fact that they are influenced by aggressive commercials.Correct determiner usage
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