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Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Diss cuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Many governments
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economic growth should be their highest priority, while others argue that
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 in other
types
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 is equally important for a nation. I agree with
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 view. In my opinion, the
development
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 of a nation is determined by various factors and financial stability is just one of them. Most governments consider that the economy is the number one priority when it comes to goal achievement. The main reason for believing
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 is that the economic growth of the particular nation is a measurement of how advanced it is in terms of general
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. One good illustration of
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 is that The United State of America is ranked higher in terms of
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 compared to a
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 world
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 because it has higher GDP, which is an economic measurement of the performance of a
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.
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, focusing on growing economies, governments can create many employment opportunities for their citizens.
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, others believe that there are other
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 of
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 that are
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 as crucial as economic
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. A particularly good example would be educational
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, educational
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 has an essential role
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worldwide. In fact when authority priorities the improvement of the education system, it will produce professional masters who get well-paying jobs. They will provide a good
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investment in the
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 by paying higher taxes.
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, education leads to economic growth. In conclusion, I believe that the financial system plays an important role to make a
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 wealthy, at the same time other
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 of
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,
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 as educational
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 is
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 important because it reaches
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economic
progress
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 as well. In my opinion, economic
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 and other
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 of
progress
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 should be considered as equals.
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