Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, people immigrate to other countries for different purposes
such
as studying or working and embrace all obstacles, pursuing a better life. In many cases,
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must learn the
language
of the country they had
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is not English most of the time. Despite the usual difficulties that will come with immigration, learning a whole new
language
also
will engage people with numerous social problems.
This
essay had been written considering that the writer believes it can be arduous in many aspects to
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abroad. At
first
, let us take a look at a matter called “cultural differences” and examine the crucial role of the
language
in it. Basically, all nations in the world had been formed by a combination of components like habits,
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, rituals, and
last
but not least,
language
. So, what will happen to you as an outsider who is not able to communicate with others by their words? To start, you cannot handle your initial needs like asking about the nearest supermarket or how to get a ticket for the bus.
Subsequently
, more complex issues will come one by one.
For instance
, it is likely impossible for you to communicate with your college friends at a party or have a chat with them about a match that you saw
last
night; at least not in the way that you wanted to express yourself. And
this
will make you feel like a total stranger.
As a result
, lack of suitable skills in
language
exacerbates all crises you have predicted would come.
In addition
, as it has been proved we are all social beings by nature and tend to live with
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from the beginning of human history.
Likewise
, if we cannot make friends or fall in love with anybody, our mind starts to collapse very soon. Proof of
this
, it can be seen in universities that students who have come from other parts of the world are more to get depressed compared to natives or students with similar speech. To illustrate, while people in Scandinavian countries do not have
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language
, they have fewer obstacles in the way of adaptation because they have similarities in words and grammar which make
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less unfamiliar.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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