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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others , however , believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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One of the problems that XXI societies are facing is the lack of
values
 of new generations,
furthermore
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 topics like
ethic
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, respect and good manners among others, are not taught anymore at school or even at home.
Instead
 of
this
, some teachers and directors argue that those
values
 should learn with mom and dad.
Furthermore
, many tutors do not worry about good manners because they just want that students get better grades on Maths or Sciences topics.
Additionally
, colleagues or even high school do not have any interest to do it, they just focus to win the latest competitions against other schools, but nothing related to
values
 that society needs.
On the other hand
, parents do not have time to teach or give some good example to their own kids about good
values
. They usually prefer to go to the pub and enjoy a good time with friends
instead
 of play or enjoy a practice of good manners.
For example
, do something together that can help the neighbourhood. In my personal opinion, both school members like, directors, teachers or tutors must work together to deploy new ways to teach
values
, and of course parents, moms and dad must do it too,
otherwise
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 there will be a lot of problems with futures generations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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