Some teachers tend to reward students who achieve high academic results, others, however, support and reward students that show the most improvement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The reward is given by tutors who achieve the top education scores,
this
is a
best appreciation for achievers. While others say that the teachers Change the article
the
willbe
given Correct your spelling
will be
prize
and support Fix the agreement mistake
prizes
who
the improving students compared to their's previous Change the pronoun
whom
score
. In this
essay, I will discuss both these opinion
and come to a logical conclusion.
On the one hand, many institutions Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
is
determined students achievement by rank-vice like high markes. Prize and Change the verb form
are
troppy
is the best way to encourage and appreciate to Correct your spelling
trophy
trippy
pupil
who toppers, Add an article
a pupil
the pupil
this
can stimulate to others will get high marks and the toppers have spent a lot
time to getting a good Add the preposition
oflot
band
so the tutors give some appreciation to them. Taking Tamilnadu
state of India, Correct article usage
the Tamilnadu
for example
, all universities are evoluated
to pupil achievement by mak based, they give gold Correct your spelling
evaluated
medel
and certificate to Correct your spelling
medal
learner
who university rank holders, Add an article
a learner
the learner
as a result
, tihis
prizes will help to Correct your spelling
this
getting
a good job for Change the verb form
get
learner
. Obviously, Add an article
the learner
a learner
this
can leads to will get good
Add an article
the good
a good
band
to others.
On the other hand
, the tutors will be given some support and reward for improving Correct article usage
the learner
learner
. Fix the agreement mistake
learners
This
kind of undergraduate is tried to will get a
best Change the article
the
score
than their's previous band
marks, hence
, professor
should be given some rewards to these people too. Add an article
the professor
a professor
For instance
, some Western countries universities have been giving a
models and Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
troppies
to their's Correct your spelling
trophies
tropics
graduate
, not only provides the toppers but Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
also
provides average undergraduate
too, Fix the agreement mistake
undergraduates
thus
, this
process can stimulate to will obtain a better marks
. Correct the article-noun agreement
better marks
a better mark
Therefore
, each and every educator should be provided some
prize or certificate to the average Add the preposition
with some
scholars
too.
To conclude, Fix the agreement mistake
scholar
reward
is the most vital for the achievers by giving their's trainer, even though, who prove to their's talent in academically to compared previous Add an article
the reward
score
, this
kind of scholar also
will recieve
some trophy by Correct your spelling
receive
educator
. In my opinion, about Add an article
the educator
an educator
this
, the teachers should be provided medels
to the improving the graduates, Correct your spelling
medals
meals
models
this
can help to their will be achieved a better band
score
in future.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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