Some teachers tend to reward students who achieve high academic results, others, however, support and reward students that show the most improvement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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best appreciation for achievers. While others say that the teachers
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will be
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and support
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the improving students compared to their's previous
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and come to a logical conclusion. On the one hand, many institutions
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determined students achievement by rank-vice like high markes. Prize and
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trophy
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who toppers,
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can stimulate to others will get high marks and the toppers have spent a
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time to getting a good
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so the tutors give some appreciation to them. Taking
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state of India,
for example
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evaluated
to pupil achievement by mak based, they give gold
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medal
and certificate to
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who university rank holders,
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,
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prizes will help to
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a good job for
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. Obviously,
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band
to others.
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learners
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.
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best
score
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marks,
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should be given some rewards to these people too.
For instance
, some Western countries universities have been giving
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models and
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trophies
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to their's
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graduates
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, not only provides the toppers but
also
provides average
undergraduate
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undergraduates
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too,
thus
,
this
process can stimulate to will obtain
a better marks
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.
Therefore
, each and every educator should be provided
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prize or certificate to the average
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too. To conclude,
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is the most vital for the achievers by giving their's trainer, even though, who prove to their's talent in academically to compared previous
score
,
this
kind of scholar
also
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receive
some trophy by
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. In my opinion, about
this
, the teachers should be provided
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medals
meals
models
to the improving the graduates,
this
can help to their will be achieved a better
band
score
in future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Incentivize
  • Academic success
  • High achievers
  • Excellence
  • Competition
  • Strive
  • Recognition
  • Encouragement
  • Inclusive
  • Educational environment
  • Personal growth
  • Middle ground
  • Efforts
  • Neglect
  • Lower the bar
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