Some teachers tend to reward students who achieve high academic results, others, however, support and reward students that show the most improvement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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best appreciation for achievers. While others say that the teachers
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and support
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the improving students compared to their's previous
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and come to a logical conclusion. On the one hand, many institutions
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determined students achievement by rank-vice like high markes. Prize and
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is the best way to encourage and appreciate to
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who toppers,
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time to getting a good
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so the tutors give some appreciation to them. Taking
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state of India,
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, all universities are
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to pupil achievement by mak based, they give gold
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and certificate to
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who university rank holders,
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,
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prizes will help to
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a good job for
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. Obviously,
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, the tutors will be given some support and reward for improving
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best
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should be given some rewards to these people too.
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, some Western countries universities have been giving
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models and
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to their's
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, not only provides the toppers but
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too,
thus
,
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, each and every educator should be provided
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prize or certificate to the average
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too. To conclude,
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is the most vital for the achievers by giving their's trainer, even though, who prove to their's talent in academically to compared previous
score
,
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kind of scholar
also
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some trophy by
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. In my opinion, about
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, the teachers should be provided
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to the improving the graduates,
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can help to their will be achieved a better
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score
in future.
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