Many small businesses are being forced to close because they are unable compete with multinational corporation? what problem does this cause and how can problem be solved?

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that in the
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world, those owners need to compete with each other, some
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and force to shut down the
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, some might conquer and become the number one in the
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.
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, there is one undeniable fact that many people who owned a small
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need to shut down their
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due to larger
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.
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with, in
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modern world, economics has a significant
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because
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the
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capitalism encourages small
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to challenge larger
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.
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is the consequence from the
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policy that if there
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competition between
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, economics are likely to grow up fast, make the
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can gain
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from
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. And, these
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will become
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blood of the country to develop the country.
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, there are some solutions
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problem, meanwhile, the authorities still gain the
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, the
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should adjust policies, reduce
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for small
businesses
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, and support to make they can compete with others, while increasing
taxes
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for larger
companies
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, or making larger
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donate the money to societies for
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the development
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of communities
instead
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of getting more payment. In summary, the
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should play an essential role in
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competition to make small
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equal to larger
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because it is hard for small
businesses
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to survive after compete with larger
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. And, the other reason is to make the competition between small and larger
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go on, to make the
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develop
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in order to
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poverty in people.
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