You have heard that your company is organising a language training abroad for a limited number of participants. Write a letter of interest:- State your position in your company Explain why they should include you in the training Explain how your training could benefit you and your company

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to convey my interest in the language training programme, our

company

is going to organise in London

month. I am Rakesh, an assistant manager in

HRD

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department and I am very much interested in attending the training programme. The

company

organises

such

training

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every three years;

however

, I missed the opportunity

last

time because previously the selection was based on experience and I was short of 6 months. But,

this

year

I am among the candidates who

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more experienced. I am working in

this

company

since

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for

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7 years. I am hoping that the selection criteria will

going

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to be based on experience

this

year

also

. As

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aforementioned I am in Human Resource Development Department, communication is the most important skill one needs to have.

This

programme would be very beneficial for me and my

company

as being the senior official, I am supposed to give training to the freshers

year

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year

. I usually take the induction sessions,

that

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which

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happens

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the beginning of joining.

Therefore

, I request you to consider my name for

this

language training session. Hoping for

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careful consideration regarding

this

matter from your side. Yours faithfully Isha

Sharawat

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Sherawat

Submitted by ishasharawat2 on Thu Oct 14 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

202 words

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