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Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development.

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Communication
 plays a vital role in conveying ideas among
others
. At present, the majority of the population are selecting the internet than direct
communication
 in order to socialise. I strongly believe that
this
 has a negative impact than
a
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one positive. On the one hand, using online become popular due to being less time consuming whereas
people
 in society are busy with their day to day activities. The major impact on
this
 is
,
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 confidential issues where anyone who is Permitted to access the internet can interrupt the ongoing processes. Recent researches conducted by Oxford University have shown that 15% of the person who is using online have less confidence in
communication
 not only with strangers but friends
also
.
Furthermore
, anyone meet
others
 directly, the conversation will be personal and it will create a strong bond among
others
.
On the other hand
, internet usage is not an easy task for every group of
people
 in society and adults are having lack knowledge of sophisticated technology.
Then
 the additional costs will be incurred in order to have the relevant knowledge and there may a miscommunication while using those methods that are not familiar. In most Asian countries, a large proportion of elder
people
 with poor knowledge are facing difficulties in using mobile devices and it will lead to isolation from society. Today, more
people
 are using online than two-way
communication
 to socialize and it has a negative development. To become the process “socialization” in an effective manner, it is mandatory to meet each
others
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 directly which facilitate making good relationship with
others
.
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