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CCTV cameras are a common sight in town centres, on public transport and outside many businesses. They not only help identify and apprehend criminals but also serve as a crime deterrent. However, some people believe that they are intrusive and constitute a breach of privacy. What do you feel is more important, personal privacy or public safety?

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Throughout the
world
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 many countries provided their crowded areas with
CCTV
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cameras
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 which are beneficial in order to identify criminals and solve a
crime
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 to its benefits, many people worry about their
privacy
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 and can not trust
CCTV
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This
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 essay will discuss the arguments supporting the importance of public safety rather than personal
privacy
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 of all, the main purpose of
CCTV
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cameras
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 is solving
crime
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, identifying suspicious actions and preventing their repentance. Modern technologies give an opportunity to find out information about criminals by matching identities and analyse their history of
crime
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. As an example, the world rate of the safest countries with the lowest value of
crime
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 shows that South Korea is estimated as the safest country. The reason for
this
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 value is explained by the appearance of
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cameras
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 everywhere in the country. South Korea is provided with the latest technical equipment and
cameras
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 have a significant role in their social life because all of the crimes are being solved by the work of
cameras
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 even in rural areas.
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, the
CCTV
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 camera is loaded by the government with an appreciation of
privacy
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 laws. Street
cameras
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 are used only in case of alarm situations and looking for someone particular. In
every day
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,life it is hard to match the street
cameras
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. Despite the fact
that is
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 always turned on, people will worry about their
privacy
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, but an accident would happen suddenly and anywhere. Considering all the arguments mentioned below, the
CCTV
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 camera are actions to avoid a
crime
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,
therefore
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 public safety can overweight personal
privacy
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