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nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather tahn to work for a company or organization. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantage of bring self employed?

#people #self #tahn #work #company #organization #be #case
there are various human beings thinking of what is really important for their environment especially when it comes related to their
bussiness
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business
 life. In
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features and
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drawbacks
 related to
this
 topic. On the one hand, if we look at the positive aspects of your own factory,
for example
. we could say it is considered
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the largest part
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 your circle. To illustrate that, it gives you more responsibility particularly in your expenditures because it is your place .
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Furthermore
, worth of freedom.To explain that,
manager
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a manager
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 who just gives you instructions to finish
this
 job right now and your time is extremely limited. You
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don
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 not have to listen to these requests from him if you have your
succsesfull
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successful
 company. Another example, attending
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conferences and
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extremely
 interesting lectures.
Also
, travelling due to your holidays is not controlled by
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being
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.
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Nonetheless
,
On the other hand
, we still confirm that if you are
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 in a company, it is immensely expanded important. The reason behind
that is
 beyond you will be engaged in a good place. To clarify that, you will be motivated and encouraged always by your supervisor.
Moreover
, take in and attend various
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meetings
thus
, you will be able to discuss numerous topics of your field.
Therefore
, help you to take off in your environment. Overall, if you set up your company without
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 experience you had from another
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institution
.
propably
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probably
, you will lose because whole the world need perfect experience in any
speciallization
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specialization
. In conclusion, start up your own business is
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 vast and important decision in your life. But
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 remember you will be engaged in high
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risk
risky
. And you can avoid it by focussing now
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 to develop
your self
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firstly
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.
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