Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, there are a lot of

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who

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while studying.

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tendency may lead to negative results, the number of young people who sacrifice

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for

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is growing. I believe that

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has certain causes and can be solved by taking special measures. It is apparent that most of the

students

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who

work

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have many financial

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to meet. One common cause is

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cost of

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. As many colleges and universities set high tuition fees, some families cannot fully afford

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higher

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for their children.

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, these

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have to

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to pay university and college fees. The other cause is living

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. Many

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study away from

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and have to pay for accommodation, food, entertainment etc. As it is often hard to cover these

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,

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are forced to earn money to afford their living. I think that the

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of

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working during their studies results in lower quality of

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and has no benefits at all.

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, it should be solved on the governmental level. I can suggest two possible solutions to

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.

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, the government could make higher

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free.

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,

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result can be achieved by financing educational establishments from the country’s budget. Not only will it make universities and colleges accessible for everyone, but it will

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reduce the number of working

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. The

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solution is promoting unpaid e-learning.

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form

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of distance

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doesn’t require a lot of resources to be maintained. What’s more,

students

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don’t have to leave their homes and can plan their schedules the way they prefer. In conclusion, I believe that mainly lack of financial resources causes

students

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to

work

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, but

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problem

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can be solved by lowering the

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of financial

expenses

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students

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have to meet.