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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree?

#growth #shops #towns #cities
It is somewhat a reality of today that all around the
world
, people are buying and selling mostly by just pressing a button. Over the years, acquiring of
commodoties
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commodities
, no matter of what measure, are traded just through computers, laptops and smartphones. Various geographical dimensions are coming closer by the day, thanks to
the
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technological intervention.
As a result
, a majority of concrete structures are already seeing the end of the day. As far as it can be
comprhended
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comprehended
,
digital
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world
 is taking over the actual
world
 quite rapidly. More so, with the advent of smartphones, things can be purchased or sold in a matter of seconds from any part of the
world
.
In addition
 to that, transportation, payments, deliveries, so much so that, even demonstrations have become flexible due to the advancement of technology. On the
oher
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other
 hand, the archival way of trade and exchange of products and money from
individual
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 to individual is
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 its charm.
Moreover
, because of
physical
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 involvement of the shoppers.
Also
, getting stuck in traffic for long hours, running from pillar to post for a single commodity.
Then
, heading right back if not satisfied with the purchase. All
this
, adds to the inconvenience. To elucidate, even though, shops are a passe now.
Neverthless
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Nevertheless
, seeing a complete end of these commercial places altogether seems more like an impossibility.
Firstly
, because out of the population of eight billion people only one-eighth is the tech-savvy one. So, a parallel way of
direct
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 connection between the vendor and the buyer is going to stay for long.
Secondly
, a buyer can easily resonate and feel connected if the item is seen physically.
Hence
, there is always going to be a strong connection between these two ways of commercial activities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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