Nowadays more and more tourists are visiting places with difficult weather conditions, such as the Sahara desert and the Antarctic region and so on. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

#tourists #places #weather #conditions #sahara #desert #antarctic #region #visit

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

in recent years, many people tend to visit

some place

Correct your spelling

someplace

show examples

that

are

Change the verb form

show examples

not

familier

Correct your spelling

familiar

as a

turist

Correct your spelling

tourist

destination and

also

have a special

claimet

Correct your spelling

claimed

claim

Although

Correct your spelling

tourist

turist

Correct article usage

the turist

show examples

industrie

Correct your spelling

industries

have plenty

benefits

Change preposition

of benefits

show examples

, it

have

Change the verb form

has

show examples

some

signifiicant

Correct your spelling

significant

drawbacks that

maybe

Correct your spelling

may be

show examples

the disadvantages of visiting the

plase

Correct your spelling

place

places

such

as I mention is more considerable than the advantages. on the one

hande

Correct your spelling

hand

, vast

majory

Correct your spelling

majority

of adventure

tourist

have passionate to

travell

Correct your spelling

travel

to some remote place that

are

Change the verb form

show examples

still natural and it

is not alter

Change the verb form

is not altered

show examples

human

Add an article

a human

show examples

unfortunatly

Correct your spelling

unfortunately

, there

Change the verb form

are

show examples

very

limitate

Replace the word

limited

show examples

places on the

erth

Correct your spelling

earth

that

are change

Change the verb form

are changing

show examples

the

habitate

Correct your spelling

habitat

by human beings. thereby, some

tourist

Fix the agreement mistake

tourists

show examples

Fix the infinitive

to go

show examples

to the Sahara desert that fewer people go

ther

Correct your spelling

there

because of the difficult

wather

Correct your spelling

weather

water

and the areas are unchanged and peur wildlife.

On the other hand

, Over the past recent decades, myriads of nature have been damage dramatically because of

tourism

Add an article

the tourism

show examples

industry.

For example

, a significant percentage of deforestation in eastern Asia special in

the

Remove the article

apply

show examples

some island

are

Change the verb form

show examples

happend

Correct your spelling

happened

happen

for building

tourist

accommodation and hotels.

thus

, there is no exaggeration that travellers can have some hazardous and detrimental impact on some

habitat

Fix the agreement mistake

habitats

show examples

Antarctic

Correct article usage

the Antarctic

show examples

region. To conclude, in terms of the environmental impact the demerits of visiting some remote place with a difficult

claimet

Correct your spelling

claimed

is more than the merits of doing it.

Although

this

act would be

extrimelly

Correct your spelling

extremely

challanging

Correct your spelling

challenging

for those who

love

Add the particle

tolove

show examples

risces

Correct your spelling

rises

this

type of trips

need

Change the verb form

needs

show examples

considderation

Correct your spelling

consideration

if will becoming

commonn

Correct your spelling

common

tourist

destinations.

Submitted by mgolnari6 on Fri Oct 15 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
43
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

241 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

extreme weather locations
sense of accomplishment
delicate balance
ecosystems
conservation efforts
economic stimulus
harsh environments
revenue

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5.5
band
A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems can this cause? How might these problems be reduced?
Developments in certain life conditions tend not to evolve small places but improve locations with high population and this not only causes big standard gaps in that country, but also creates uneven tax expenditures. In order to solve these problems, the government of that nation ought to spend more on rural places and locate some main buildings there.
5.5
band
some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as many and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion
According to some people, if you work hard and possess enough determination, you will achieve success in life. Others, however, insist that money and looks play a greater role in helping a person succeed. In my opinion, both views have their merits while good looks or money alone can not help a person succeed, in many factors, hard work or determination is not sufficient either.
6
band
Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved?
Some ex-prisoners reoffend after their release. I believe this is mainly because they have difficulty reentering the society. To solve this problem, prisons should prioritize rehabilitation over sentence.
5
band
Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Recently, thanks to the globalization, a wide range of products can be chosen by consumers from all over the globe. Consequently, countries look a lot alike, more than they used to do in the past. This situation has both positive and negative effects.
7.5
band
Some people say that advertisinzg is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently, we have been exposed to advertisements continuously. They are everywhere: on social media, on television and even in the streets. As a result, we get used to them very easily, but they still influence our choices as consumers.

Nowadays more and more tourists are visiting places with difficult weather conditions, such as the Sahara desert and the Antarctic region and so on. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Fully explain your ideas

A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems can this cause? How might these problems be reduced?

some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as many and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved?

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people say that advertisinzg is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.