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Solar Energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world.why is this?what are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy.

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Lately ,
sun
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energy
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 is in demand in a number of homes across the globe .
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 essay will explore the benefits and demerit's and give a conclusion.
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energy
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 and it is beneficial to the environment .Solar panels have been introduced as one method of transmitting
energy
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thus
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 transforming solar
power
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as
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 a source of clean
energy
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.
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 kind of
power
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 comes with low maintenance costs ,
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 means it is affordable and incidences of tear and wear hardly come by. Solar radiation is renewable and is available all the time it can never run out unlike other forms of
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 where you
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 to recharge to continue using electricity.
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, hydro-electricity,does not come in
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 considering
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 of materials for installation,
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 will cost an arm and a leg, another problem is , it is weather dependent meaning without the sun gathering of
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 will be close to none,
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 rainy seasons will have an effect on
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 productivity.
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, at night sunshine is not available and alternatives are devised to aid in
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 production.
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 ,renewable source of
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 expensive and inefficient but is safe for the environment because
emission
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the emission
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 of harmful gases is not a factor in
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 kind of
energy
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. Economies of the world should consider transitioning to
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 form of
energy
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 which has been welcomed by some industries.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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