Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of the public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
For many centuries smoking tobacco and its product has been a pandemic that has plagued the world. As
such
, the health of many has suffered through it directly or indirectly. Active and passive smoking creates a huge risk on an indiviual's
health. Correct your spelling
individual's
Therefore
I agree the tabacoo
use should be completely banned by the government.
Correct your spelling
tobacco
Firstly
, the most prominent effect of tabaco
is on human health. Correct your spelling
tobacco
For instance
, WHO statistics show that smoking cigarette is one of the leading cause
of many diseases, by destroying important cells and enlarging Fix the agreement mistake
causes
of
the body organs, Change preposition
apply
there by
causing reduced life span. passive smoking Correct your spelling
thereby
oif
Correct your spelling
of
cigar
by people surrounding a smoker is as bad as the person smoking it. Correct article usage
a cigar
For example
, if a parent is smoking around their kids it will have more severe damage to the child causing respiratory illness.
Secondly
, it has caused other problems like house fire which in turn leads to loss of life and property. For example
, in Europe where smoking is a general habbit
, has seen many smokers not disposing Correct your spelling
habit
off
their cigarettes properly leading to house fires. Change the preposition
of
This
shows that smoking also
causes lot
of mishaps that can be prevented if there are regulations in place.
In conclusion, the negatives of smoking outweigh the positive effects it would have. It only causes addictions the more it is in circulation. To end Change the article
a lot
this
, I strongly agree with the ban on cigarettes and tobacco products by the regime , so as to eliminate self destructive
Add a hyphen
self-destructive
habbit
and increase the quality of living.Correct your spelling
habit
habits
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