You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should write at least 150 words.

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DEAR DIRECTOR, SPECIAL GREETINGS TO YOU. I TRUST YOU'RE KEEPING SAFE?. I WRITE TO INFORM YOU OF MY MISSING STUDENT ID CARD WHICH AT

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POINT IN TIME ITS USEFULNESS CANNOT BE OVEREMPHASIZED.

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HAPPENED NOT SO LONG AGO PRECISELY TWO WEEKS AGO AT THE STUDENT HOSTEL. I HAVE ENGAGED IN A 72HRS SEARCH ALL TO NO AVAIL WITHOUT MISSING WORDS I NEED YOUR SUPPORT WITH THE PROVISION OF A NEW ONE.

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I HAVE ENCOUNTERED MANY CHALLENGES WITH IDENTIFICATION ON CAMPUS AND CANNOT ACCESS THE LIBRARY FOR MY ROUTINE PERSONAL ACTIVITIES THEREBY LIMITING MY EXPOSURE TO REQUIRED LEARNING MATERIALS AND DISCOUNTS WHICH COME FROM SPORTING EVENTS IS NOT ENJOYED AS A STUDENT ID IS A CLEAR REQUIREMENT TO MAXIMIZE BENEFITS WITHIN SCHOOL. SIR, I WOULD BE GRATEFUL IF A NEW ID CAN BE ISSUED BEFORE THE END OF THE MONTH. THANKS IN ADVANCE FOR YOUR GARGANTUAN SUPPORT. REGARDS, ALEXANDER IKHIMWIN

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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7 paragraphs

151 words

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